sábado, 1 de septiembre de 2012

trip with the assasin by Cristian and Emilio


Trip with the assassin

One day three friend were having fun at the beach but suddenly one of the friends disappear, anybody knows why, but he didn´t come again.



The two remaining friend returns to the hotel and they realize that many of their roommates friends were killed, they don´t know why they were killed. They were shocked and also very scared about this terrorific scene; later then the two friends went to the police station, and they told them about the mass murder in the hotel room, one police went to see, this police was Christopher he was a lieutenant of the army of the city.










The next day Christopher took the corpses to a morgue for analysis, but all of the body disappear and the two friend didn´t know why; the two friends were very scared and they wanted to scape of the beach, but they couldn´t because their car disappear from nowhere and their wallets too. They were stuck in that place alone, the two friends run to the police station to see who can help them, but the other policeman was lying down death, and they saw that Christopher was burying his partner, and they already know that the police “Christopher” was the murderer of the all his roommates and know the murderer of his own police partner.

Christopher saw the two friends outside of the cemetery where he was burying his friend, then he chased the two friends, and they run away, they return to the police station and the boy find a gun, when the police arrived, he aimed to his heart and shoot, and he kills Christopher, after he killed the police he smiled and he laughed a lot, and she didn´t know why, then he said that “Christopher was only an excuse for my killings, the criminal master mind was me” and smiled again. She so very confused, all the trip was only an excuse to kill all people that was his friends, she didn´t why, then the boy said now is your turn, and he shoot again, and the bullet killed her, The boy smiled and laughed again, and he escaped with the car, he was the one who hide the car, and after he drive to another city to find their next victims.                     

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1 comentario:

  1. Nice story, however, you should have reviewed it before posting it. It has a lot of writing mistakes, which makes it difficult to understand.

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