sábado, 8 de septiembre de 2012

Three Skeleton Keys Alternative by from José

JEAN (narrates): we were trapped, two days more. And Louis was no moving, we couldn't cure him in a perfect way. So he was still bledding, 5 hours later he died. Auguste seems like he wasn't sad but I know that deep inside he was crying, I was crying, we couldn't do anything for him, 2 hours later we where starving, at the point that we couldn't think too much. But Auguste had an idea, but it would need a sacrifice.
AUGUSTE: I think that we can use Louis body to distract the rats. I know it's no thr richgt way, buy is our only way to scape from here.
JEAN (narrates): So we hid behind a big box that was at the end of the room, and we put Louis body near the trap door. Before that we tide the rope from the tool kit into the trap door handle. So we pull the rope and the door opened. The rats ran into the room, they see the body and they begin to eat it, we use that time to scape. We ran to the exit, and we close the door, so the rats were locked in. But they begin to ribble the door.
AUGUSTE (narrates): We didn't have much time, so we were going down and the floor brokes. We fall into the storage room. So we take all the food we could, and we ate as fast as we could. We were triying to get out from the storage room but the door was blocked from the other side. Apparently with the rubble from the roof. We see another door, with a skull carved in the front and three key holes.
JEAN: I saw something in the tool kit that I think will help.
AUGUSTE (narrates): he took out a strange key, made from a skeleton, and it has a rare form. It was like it has three different keys in one. We didn't had too much time to think. The rats made a hole in the trap door, they were coming after us. So we opened the door. Everything was dark.
JEAN (narrates): I took the lantern from the tool kit. We were walking into a cave, was moisty and the echoes of the rats sounds were much intense and loud. We saw a light at the end of the cave. So we ran to light, at the end there was a little lake, with a hidden dock. And in the dock there was a big and old pirate ship. But it was infested of rats. Some of them were bigger than the others, I began to think that they were adult monter rats. But that is not the piont, we were stocked between rats, giant rats.
AUGUSTE: They see us, RUNN¡¡¡.
JEAN (narrates): We ran into the water, we were swimming to fast, but the rats were more. They took us, they ate our bodies, they left the bones, and we still alive. Like Skeletons we became the cave guardians, Louis was alive too, we three kill everybody who enter in the cave. That is the pact we had with the rats, we will hunt people to feed them. And they will give us back our bodies.

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  2. Wow you are really imaginative haha your ending was completely diferent of mine :)att Stephanie

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  3. Great ending!! I wouldn't have thought of them actually working for the rats!

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